The table and charts below give information on the police bugjet for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police bugjet for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed.
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The table illustrates the police
budget
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in the years 2017 and 2018 and the pie charts depict the expenditure on three different categories namely salaries, technology and building and transport.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the highest income for the police
budget
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was dominated by the national government,
while
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the largest money spent was allocated to salaries (officers and staff) in both years. At the beginning of the period, the police
budget
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from the national government stood at 175.5
million
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and had a slight increase to 177.8
million
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.
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, the figures for local taxes and other sources (eg grants) made up 91.2
million
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and 38
million
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, respectively and increased by 10.9% and 0.5%,
accordingly
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.
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, there was an increment in the total
budget
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by 13.9
million
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.
On the other hand
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, the expenditure on salaries saw a considerable decrease from 75% in 2017 to 69% in 2018.
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, technology accounted for 8% in 2017 and almost doubled in the following year. Interestingly, the figure for buildings and transport remained unchanged at 17% in both years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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