The pie charts below show the different types of courses, which were followed by the students during the years of 1984, 1994 and 2004.
The pie charts compare the different types of
courses
,which were followed by students
in 1984,1994 and 2004.
Overall
,it is clear that
most students
followed face-to-face courses
for 30 years. Moreover
,the least of students
studied in online courses
.
13% of students
took mixed media courses
in 1984. While
this
number increased to 15% in 1994, in 2004 jumped to 35%. 20% of students
gave interest in correspondence courses
in 1984 and 1994 respectively. After ten years this
number decreased to 15%. in 1994 students
followed to new type of course, online courses
and 11% of students
followed it. In 2004 were followed by 10% of the students
. The most famous courses
were face-to-face courses
, and in 1984 it had 67%,while
after ten years this
number decreased to 54% and in 2004 it had only 40%.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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