The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given line chart compares information about how much money per dollar that 3 various bakeries namely, Amandine,

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, and Bolo in Calgary could be earned in the period of 1 year from 2000 to 2010.

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, it was important that the fashion of yearly income for all stores other than

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Bakeshop increased over the period of one decade.

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the diagram, in the beginning,

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Bakeshop, the main shop that had the highest income among other bakeries in Calgary between 2000 and 2005, hit just over 80000;

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it rose to the maximum mark at nearly 95000 in 2001 it decreased moderately to 80000 in 2003;

however

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, it rose and in 2003, it reached roughly the same number as in 2003. Later it declined significantly to almost 40000 in 2008;

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it was constant until 2010. The graph demonstrates that Amandine and Bolo had reversed the trend as

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owing to the fact that Amandine Bakery touched approximately 55000 in 2000;

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, its earnings stabilized until 2005;

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it leapt overwhelmingly to just under 105000 in 2010.

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, Bolo Cakery recorded 20000 for the first time;

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it grew somewhat to just under 40000 in 2003;

then

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it was steady until 2006. Later it went up considerably to almost 62000 in 2010

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

216 words

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The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

When choosing the best candidate for a job, employers should consider personal qualities more than qualification and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that children can learn about history by visiting museums, while others feel that there are better ways to learn about history. Discuss both views and give your opinion.