The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented line chart compares data about how much money which 3 various places incomed annually in Calgary between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, it was important that the trends of Amadin and Bolo bakeries increased while
the Maries' fashion declined over the period of 10 years.
According to
the diagram, at the start, Mari Bakeshop, which was the popular store, was approximately 80000; then
it climbed and touched a nadir in 2001 at 95000; nevertheless
, it dipped moderately and hit 40000 in 2009 after that the number was steady until 2010.
The graph shows that Amadin bakery, the second one, was constant by 55000 from 2000 to 2005; thereafter
, it leapt overwhelmingly and touched roughly 105000 in 2010. Thirdly
, in the start, the Bolo shop was 20000; then
it jumped slightly to nearly 49000 in 2003 and the figure stabilised until 2006. Later its direction like the prior market improved enormously and reached 65000.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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