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The charts compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001

The charts compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001
#people #household* #uk
The bar chart shows how the number of
people
 in
families
 has changed in the years 1981 and 2001 in the UK.
Overall
, it can be seen that out of six types of
families
, one with two
people
 was dominant in both periods
while
families
 that had six members were less common.
Moreover
, a significant increase was seen in the number of single-person
families
. In 1981, the highest proportion(31%) was made up
by
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 households with two
people
.
Also
, the
families
 with one, three, and four members contributed to approximately 18%. The
less
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lowest
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 proportions of the chart in the first year belonged to households with five and six
people
, making 8 and 6 percentages respectively. After 20 years, the
families
 with two members kept the dominance with just above one-third(34%). There were
not
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 noteworthy changes in figures in comparison with the first year apart from
people
 who live alone, whose contributions increased to about a quarter(26%).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, families with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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