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The charts compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001

The charts compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001
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The bar chart shows how the number of
people
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 in
families
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 has changed in the years 1981 and 2001 in the UK.
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, it can be seen that out of six types of
families
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, one with two
people
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 was dominant in both periods
while
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families
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 that had six members were less common.
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, a significant increase was seen in the number of single-person
families
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. In 1981, the highest proportion(31%) was made up
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 households with two
people
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.
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, the
families
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 with one, three, and four members contributed to approximately 18%. The
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lowest
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 proportions of the chart in the first year belonged to households with five and six
people
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, making 8 and 6 percentages respectively. After 20 years, the
families
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 with two members kept the dominance with just above one-third(34%). There were
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 noteworthy changes in figures in comparison with the first year apart from
people
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 who live alone, whose contributions increased to about a quarter(26%).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, families with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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