The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.

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of different types were at a

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from 1997 to 2012. Looking from an

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perspective, it is discernible that throughout the period, most guests of the

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were adults, the opposite was true for exhibition viewers.

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, an increased trend was witnessed in the

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of

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to the

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after 15 years. In 1997, 448000

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came to the

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. The majority of

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were adults and a small part were children, at 300100 and 12000

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respectively. Notably, only 28000 guests went there to watch the special exhibitions. After 5 years, the figures remained stable. A significant rise was seen in 2007 in the

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of museums’ guests, to 525000

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.

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that 525000

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,

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of them were adults,

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by approximately 100000 in 5 years. In that year, 87000 and 37000 were those aged under 15 and special exhibition

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, respectively. In 2012, there were only 504300

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. The

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of adult

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and young

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slightly reduced to 380000 and 82300, correspondingly. Significantly, the

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of

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who went to exhibitions underwent a growth of 5000

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.