The graph shows visitor numbers to 5 attractions in the city of Parkvale from 1996 to 2016

The graph demonstrates the

number

of

visitors

to five of the main attractions found in Parkvale between 1996

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2016.

Overall

, there

had

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been an increase in the

number

of

visitors

to the National Gallery and the Indigenous Art Centre over the

twenty year

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period.

Conversely

,

visitors

to the Aquarium

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State Zoo have dropped significantly by 2016,

while

the Museum attracted the same

number

of

visitors

over the given period. In 1996, the National Gallery had about 300,000

visitors

.

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number

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nearly

trippled

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tripled

by 2004 before it dropped slightly to 800,000

visitors

in 2008.

However

, the

number

of

visitors

continued to rise over the next 8 years to reach its peak of about 900,000 in 2016.

Similarly

,

Visitors

to the

Indiginous

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Indigenous

Art Centre rose from nearly zero in 1996 to reach a peak of approximately 400,000 in 2004 after which the

number

decreased over the following 12 years. Aquarium

visitors

have witnessed a

signifivant

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significant

drop from approximately 500,000

visitor

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visitors

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in 1996 to less than 100,000

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twenty years later.

Similarly

, State Zoo

visitors

dropped from 300,000 to less than 200,000 in 2016. Museum

visitors

,

on the other hand

, remained stable over the twenty-year period, accounting for just over 400,000 visits.