Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think law are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
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Start with a clearer thesis statement. Your opinion is clear but could be stated more effectively.
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Ensure you have a well-defined structure: Introduction, Body Paragraphs, Conclusion.
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Provide more specific examples and data to support your points.
coherence cohesion
Use more linking words and phrases to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs.
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Improve spelling and grammar. Consider using tools or having someone proofread your work.
coherence cohesion
Summarize your points effectively in a conclusion. This makes your argument more impactful.
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Your enthusiasm for recycling is evident and persuasive.
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Mentioning personal actions towards recycling adds authenticity to your essay.
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