The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the carts show how it was distributed.
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illustrate that Correct your spelling
charts
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give information on the police budget during Correct your spelling
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2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table provides where the money came from and the carts show how it was distributed
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apply
Overall
it is clear that
the table show
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shows
increases
rate during to 2018 Fix the agreement mistake
increase
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information about how the money was spent it is rose salaries ( officers and staff )
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provides
it
is police budget from 2018 increased Correct pronoun usage
apply
national
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the national
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government
percentage
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a percentage
177.8
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of 177.8
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the local taxes increased dramatically become average
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an average
102.3
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of 102.3
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the other sources no
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do not
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apply
is
the period Correct your spelling
in
2018
increased average the total became 318.6 Change preposition
in 2018
percent
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per cent
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the pie illustrates information about who
the money was Correct word choice
how
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apply
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a disparity
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per cent
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decreased
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