The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
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The
table
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and charts show dates on the police budget over the given periods between 2017 and 2018 in place of the UK,
however
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, where the money came from was shown in the
table
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and how it was distributed was given in the chart.
Overall
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, it can be pointed out from the chart that, the salaries were the highest
while
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the technology was the lowest in a specific period.
Moreover
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,It is obvious from the
table
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that, the National government was the biggest
while
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other sources were the smallest between 2017 and 2018. It is clear from the
table
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that, the National government started at 175.5m and increased by 177.8m between 2017 and 2018.
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, the other sources went up from 38m to 38.5m in a given period,
then
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, it was below two different categories.
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, it is clear from the chart, that salaries decreased from 75% to 69% between 2017 and 2018,
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it was
above all
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that technology and buildings and transport.
However
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, the buildings and transport were unpopular throughout which stayed stable.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words table, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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