The government should provide free public transport facilities 24/7 to reduce traffic congestion. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is undeniable that a free public

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system is crucial for dwellers in major cities and provides them with the convenience to travel.

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, it is not necessary to launch a 24/7 idea to reduce the number of cars on the roads as it will bring many drawbacks to those cities

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. In my opinion, I disagree with

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viewpoint and the reasons will be outlined before a conclusion is reached.

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with, data from researchers all around the world have shown for decades that most of the public

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facilities are being used in rush hours, at 7.00-8.00 and 17.00-18.00.

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these data, it means there is no use in opening them at night time of the day and it is a waste of money which the government need to pay for the staff in each facility.

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, during the night time, some staff

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as a bus driver might fall asleep

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driving and cause a lot of damage to public

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or in the worst case, it directly affects not only pedestrians but

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other drivers leading to a tragedy.

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, it is a waste of energy in order to turn engines on and maintain them on that stage for a long time even if there are no passengers.

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, sky or metropolitan trains waste their energy by turning on the lights

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an A/C as same as the buses which natural gas is used are running on their routes without passengers will twice the pollution in our world.

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, developing countries ,which do not have renewable resources and

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main power comes from coal or natural gas, need to generate more power to supply their

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facilities and a combustion of their power generating leads to an air pollution problem. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with

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viewpoint as it only

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negative impacts. The government should find other ways to support commuters to reduce traffic congestion. By introducing a campaign to convince dwellers to use the public

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system or informing

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owners of the bad effects of using individual cars.

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Support your arguments with more diverse examples, including statistics, real-life instances, or hypothetical scenarios to enhance your argumentation.

Coherence & Cohesion

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Coherence & Cohesion

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The essay addresses the topic directly and maintains focus on the argument throughout.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

351 words

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