The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. at least 150 words.
This
graph illustrates the different
visitors
who have travelled
three
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to three
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different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. 70,000
visitors
have mostly visited the lakes and the coasts in these 20 years
while
the
number
of
visitors
only increased from 20,000 to 35,000 from 1987 to 2007.
Firstly
, the
number
of travellers to the coast was 40,000, to the mountains was 20,000, and to the lakes was 10,000.The
number
of
visitors
to the cost decreased to 35,000 in 1992
then
it started increasing rapidly until it reached 75,000 in 2007.
Visitors
to the lakes were slowly increasing till 1997. It increases from 10,000 to 40,000. Its speed increases and the
number
of
visitors
increases from 40,000 to 75,000 in 2002 afterwards it decreases to 50,000 in 2007.
However
, the
number
of travellers to the mountains did not
rapid
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rapidly
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increase or decrease even though it increased very slowly the
number
increased from 20,000 to 35,000 in 20 years.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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