The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. at least 150 words.

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graph illustrates the different

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who have travelled

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different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. 70,000

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have mostly visited the lakes and the coasts in these 20 years

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the

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of

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only increased from 20,000 to 35,000 from 1987 to 2007.

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, the

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of travellers to the coast was 40,000, to the mountains was 20,000, and to the lakes was 10,000.The

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of

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to the cost decreased to 35,000 in 1992

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it started increasing rapidly until it reached 75,000 in 2007.

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to the lakes were slowly increasing till 1997. It increases from 10,000 to 40,000. Its speed increases and the

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of

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increases from 40,000 to 75,000 in 2002 afterwards it decreases to 50,000 in 2007.

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, the

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of travellers to the mountains did not

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increase or decrease even though it increased very slowly the

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increased from 20,000 to 35,000 in 20 years.