The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. at least 150 words.
This
graph illustrates the different visitors
who have travelled three
different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
70,000 Change preposition
to three
visitors
have mostly visited the lakes and the coasts in these 20 years while
the number
of visitors
only increased from 20,000 to 35,000 from 1987 to 2007.
Firstly
, the number
of travellers to the coast was 40,000, to the mountains was 20,000, and to the lakes was 10,000.The number
of visitors
to the cost decreased to 35,000 in 1992 then
it started increasing rapidly until it reached 75,000 in 2007.Visitors
to the lakes were slowly increasing till 1997. It increases from 10,000 to 40,000. Its speed increases and the number
of visitors
increases from 40,000 to 75,000 in 2002 afterwards it decreases to 50,000 in 2007.However
, the number
of travellers to the mountains did not rapid
increase or decrease even though it increased very slowly the Change the word
rapidly
number
increased from 20,000 to 35,000 in 20 years.Submitted by Saad Kamal on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
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