The diagrams show how the layout of a school library changed.

The diagrams show how the layout of a school library changed.
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The given maps illustrate the different arrangements in a school
library
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between 5 years back and the present.
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, as we can see, the
library
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now has more facilities for students than five years ago by adding
two
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study tables and an instrument for copy and printing.
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, the office department is changed to a conference
room
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. With a short glance at the
two
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maps, we can see the
library
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had a free space behind the entrance door five years ago, but it is occupied with printers and copiers now.
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, the number of study tables located in the free space in the middle of
two
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bookshelves has increased. The office department that was located in the southeast of the
library
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has changed its
functional
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and is replaced with a conference
room
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. Other parts of the
library
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layout in the
two
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maps have remained exactly in the same location. There are three parts
neighboring
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to
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each other in the west of the
library
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including
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the class
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class
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classroom
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room
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, meeting
room
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and the
librarian
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desk .
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, there is a computer desk in the east adjacent to the conference
room
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. The
library
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has
two
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bookshelves beside the north and south walls parallel to each other.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, two, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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