You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the average amount of carbon dioxide produced by each person in four different countries ( the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal) over a period of 40 years.
It is noticeable that the residents from the UK created the highest amount of toxic gases each year,
while
Italy and Portugal saw a discernable increase in the emission of CO2.
In 1967, the citizens of the UK generated by far the most proportion of carbon dioxide, with almost 11 tonnes. Swedish people were the second most CO2 producers with around 8,900 tonnes. Just a decade later, Sweden was near to overtake
Wrong verb form
overtaking
the
UK counterparts.
During the period shown, Italy and Portugal illustrated the same figure, with 1.600 and 4.200 tonnes in the previous years. After 1987, Italian people were producing more CO2 than Swedish individuals. Change the word
its
Finally
, in 2007, Portugal overtook Sweden as a
third primary manufacturer of Correct article usage
the
this
poisonous gases.Correct determiner usage
these
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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