The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2017 and in 2010

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2017 and in 2010
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The maps depict some changes that were made to a city hospital transport infrastructure between 2007 and 2010. It is noticeable that three
mains
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modifications were made to
hospital’s
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the hospital’s
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vehicle access. These involve the building of a new
bus
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station, new roundabouts,
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and new
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parking facilities. Looking at the changes in more detail, we can see that in 2007 there were three
bus
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stops on either side of Hospital
Road
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. These were no longer present in 2010, and
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instead
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we see the addition of a
bus
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station on the west side of Hospital
Road
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.
This
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bus
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station is accessed via two new roundabouts; the first roundabout is at the intersection of City
Road
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and Hospital
Road
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,
while
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the second is at the other end of Hospital
Road
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, at the junction with the hospital ring
road
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. The two maps
also
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show that changes were made to public and staff parking areas. In 2007, staff and visitors used the same car park, which was situated to the east of Hospital
Road
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and accessed via the ring
road
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.
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, by 2010 the original car park had become a designated area for staff parking only. A new car park, located on the east side of the ring
road
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, provided parking for members of the public.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bus, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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