The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2017 and in 2010

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2017 and in 2010
The maps depict some changes that were made to a city hospital transport infrastructure between 2007 and 2010. It is noticeable that three
mains
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modifications were made to
hospital’s
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the hospital’s
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vehicle access. These involve the building of a new
bus
station, new roundabouts,
new
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and new
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parking facilities. Looking at the changes in more detail, we can see that in 2007 there were three
bus
stops on either side of Hospital
Road
. These were no longer present in 2010, and
instead
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we see the addition of a
bus
station on the west side of Hospital
Road
.
This
bus
station is accessed via two new roundabouts; the first roundabout is at the intersection of City
Road
and Hospital
Road
,
while
the second is at the other end of Hospital
Road
, at the junction with the hospital ring
road
. The two maps
also
show that changes were made to public and staff parking areas. In 2007, staff and visitors used the same car park, which was situated to the east of Hospital
Road
and accessed via the ring
road
.
However
, by 2010 the original car park had become a designated area for staff parking only. A new car park, located on the east side of the ring
road
, provided parking for members of the public.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bus, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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