The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons

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The two maps compare the design of Riverage

College

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30 years ago and how it appears at present after development.

Overall

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, we can see the

college

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has undergone many changes today by establishing more facilities to make students feel convenient,

such

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music

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a music

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room

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and café. With a short glance at two maps, the difference between

two

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the two

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times will

reveal

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be revealed

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. The green place of

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the college

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college

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college is

college was

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adjacent to

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the sport

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sport

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sports

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hall, which was filled with flowers has been replaced with some steps.

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, the refractory department has been altered into an office, so four separate office departments located above the reception in the old layout have been combined with each other and an art-class

room

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is built now.

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, a new café has been constructed exactly below the library which was a common

room

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before.

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, a music

room

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has been added to the layout directly underneath the reception block. The space of parking

at the end

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of the

college

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has been eliminated and changed to a green space with trees.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words college, room with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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5 paragraphs

173 words

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