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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives information about the
households
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 in the US with their income in a whole year in 2007,2011
also
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 2015.
Overall
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, in 2015 were highest
number
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 of housekeeping earned more than 100,000
dollars
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 in all periods.It is noticeable, that in all 3 years the
number
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 of
households
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 that earn up three quarters out of 100 thousand bucks. The
number
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 of
households
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 that get less than a
quarter
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 of 100,000
dollars
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 and those that receive between a
quarter
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 and
half
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 of 100 thousand bucks are almost the same each year for about 27 million
nevertheless
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 housekeeping that earns
half
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 and 3 quarters of 100,000
dollars
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 are almost the same in all periods.The
number
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 of
households
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 that get less than a
quarter
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 of 100,000
dollars
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 and those that receive between a
quarter
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 and
half
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 of 100 thousand bucks are almost the same each year for about 27 million
nevertheless
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 housekeeping that earns
half
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 and 3 quarters of 100,000
dollars
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 are almost the same in all periods.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "nevertheless".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, number, dollars, quarter, half with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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