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The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory. Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process.

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This
 report derives from the listed flow chart which enumerates the process of how plastic paper
clips
 are made from molten plastic in a small plant. A glance at the diagram reveals that there are 6 pivotal stages in the procedure, commencing with selecting a
color
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 format and terminating with wrapping and delivering
clips
.
This
 is achieved by strength and
color
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 mixture inspecting
along with
 distributing methodology. As far as the initial step is concerned It starts with remelting plastic into a
colored
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 one, more precisely, red, blue, and yellow
molds
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 followed by quality verification in terms of durability.
While
 defective samples are bumped out in the 3rd stage, the control passed ones go to classification, done by hand in stage 4. Henceforth,
mixed-colored
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 and
single-colored
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clips
 undergo assorting by
color
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 quality.
In addition
, a classified component is involved in the process of sorting. Ultimately, 6th step requires packing all of the manufactured
clips
 and sending them to stores.
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task achievement
Ensure that each stage of the process is clearly explained and avoid redundant phrases such as 'as far as the initial step is concerned'. This will improve clarity and focus.
coherence cohesion
Focus on logical sequencing and avoid abrupt transitions to enhance coherence. Using clear transitional phrases can help in providing a smoother flow.
coherence cohesion
The essay contains a well-structured introduction and conclusion which encapsulates the overall process effectively.
task achievement
The key stages of the production process have been identified correctly, showing good understanding of the topic.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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