The graph and chart below give information about 3d cinema screens and releases

The graph and chart below give information about 3d cinema screens and releases
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph and chart below give information about 3d cinema screens and releases
The information about global 3D films
are
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is
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represented in two different aspects: one is the number of cinema screens in a line graph and the other about film
releases
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shown in a bar chart over a 7-8 years period of time.
Overall
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, it can be clearly observed that the data depicted similar exponential trends in both diagrams.
However
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, it is interesting to note that though
live action
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live-action
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was introduced later, its figures outnumbered animations since
then
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.
To begin
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with, between 2005 and 2008, the number of 3D cinema screens constantly increased
of
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by
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not more than 2,500 on average.
On the other hand
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, the trend has slightly pivoted since 2008. From 2008 onwards, the figures dramatically rose to roughly over 10,000 annually before reaching its peak at slightly under 40,000 in 2011. In regards to film
releases
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, it is noticeable that animation was solely premiered on the screen with less than 5 each year and remained stable throughout 2005-2007. Surprisingly, with the introduction of
live action
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live-action
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movies in 2008, the gap between both types of
releases
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became wider
in
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than
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which
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apply
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that of live
actions
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action
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roughly about 2.5-folded
of
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apply
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its counterpart before
projected
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being projected
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to 75
releases
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in 2012.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words releases with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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