The table shows the average length of video advertisements on the Internet and the average length of time viewers spend watching them. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The table shows the average length of video advertisements on the Internet and the average length of time viewers spend watching them.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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This
table illustrates the mean length of online
advertisements
and the average
time
that people spend
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watching them. The ads which are most common among all of the types is Public service.The average
time
of
this
type of ad is 45.8
seconds
with a watch
time
of 18.5
seconds
.The length of clothing
advertisements
is the smallest among all of the types
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14.6
seconds
and people spend only six
seconds
watching these
advertisements
.
In addition
, automotive, entertainment and other retail have the highest length of
advertisements
with
time
lengths of 27.2
seconds
, 27.8
seconds
and 4.5
seconds
respectively.
Whereas
Humans have spent most of their
time
watching automotive
advertisements
among entertainment and other retail with an average
time
of 14.7
seconds
.
However
,clothing and pharmaceuticals are advertised for the shortest amount of
time
which is 14.6 and 15.3
seconds
and communities have spent only 6 and 7.1
seconds
respectively on watching them.
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