The diagram below shows the changes, which took place in a coastal area called Pentland from 1950 to 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagrams below.
The two maps illustrate the changes
occurred
in a coastal Correct pronoun usage
that occurred
area
called Portland, between 1950 and 2007.
Overall
, Portland underwent significant development over the 57 years, with several new facilities constructed, existing ones demolished, and wide natural areas removed.
In 1950, there were few numbers of buildings and wide grasslands. A road
went through the area
started
from a sea Wrong verb form
starting
it
the top part. Correct your spelling
at
In
the left Change preposition
On
side
of this
road
, there was an industrial area
with just three facilities, in addition
to grassland
in the bottom corner. While
in
the right Change preposition
on
side
of the road
, there were
a car park and another Correct subject-verb agreement
was
grassland
.
Looking ahead to 2007, additional roads are
constructed, and the industrial Wrong verb form
were
area
was removed to make way for introducing a multi-store
car park, swimming pool and park. The Correct your spelling
multi-storey
grassland
in
the left Change preposition
on
side
of the main road
was replaced by three shops and cinema
, separated by a new Correct article usage
a cinema
road
. There were remark changes in the right side
of the road
as well as
, apartments complex is built alongside the right costal, while
on the bottom corner
two line of houses and three shops are built, Add a comma
corner,
while
the old facilities and grassland
are totally removed. Finally
, A yacht marine with road
around the coastal line Add an article
the road
a road
were
constructed.Change the verb form
was
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road, side, grassland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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