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The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the value of a single share over the period of 5 years from 1995 to 2001, and the pie chart illustrates the proportions of
sales
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 it made in the five continents (Asia, Africa, North
America
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, South
America
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, and Europe).
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,
it is clear that
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 the markets of North
America
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 experienced the highest
sales
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 and it made $17.1bn in total, and the stock price increased over the given period. Looking at the line graph, the price of a Coca-Cola stock stood at nearly $35,
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 figure increased sharply over the next three years. In 1998, it reached its peak and was worth around $85.
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 figure failed to keep the momentum and fell sharply in 2000 to below $50.
On the other hand
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, the pie chart shows that nearly 30.4% of
sales
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 were made in North
America
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,
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 is the highest proportion in comparison to its counterparts.
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, the figures of 25.7%, 20.5%, and 16.4% were recorded in Latin
America
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, Europe, and Asia respectively. Interestingly, The African and Middle Eastern regions had the lowest ratio of
sales
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 at merely 7% .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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