The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The figures illustrate the layout of a building on campus and the new design for development by 2020.

Overall

, there will be several changes including removing a footpath, adding some rooms and modifying the location of essential spots. For the present building, a footpath is available next to the parking area.

Then

, the developer will hide

this

way followed by erasing the garden.

As a result

, the car park and the size of a group of buildings will be longer than it was.

By contrast

, there will be no change in the road and bus stop in the new plan in 2020.

In addition

, the designer

therefore

has been planning to build more classrooms and to relocate some vital places

such

as reception, library and toilet. The initial classrooms are only three and it will be five by 2020.

While

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apply

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the lunch area will be limited because half of that land has planned to be used as a shop in the future appeared.

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

163 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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architecture
renovation
infrastructure
facade
landscaping
expansion
amenities
accessibility
pedestrian
vehicular traffic
demolition
construction
recreational areas
commons
atrium
courtyard
upgrade
sustainability
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egress
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