The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figures illustrate the layout of a building on campus and the new design for development by 2020.
Overall
, there will be several changes including removing a footpath, adding some rooms and modifying the location of essential spots.
For the present building, a footpath is available next to the parking area. Then
, the developer will hide this
way followed by erasing the garden. As a result
, the car park and the size of a group of buildings will be longer than it was. By contrast
, there will be no change in the road and bus stop in the new plan in 2020.
In addition
, the designer therefore
has been planning to build more classrooms and to relocate some vital places such
as reception, library and toilet. The initial classrooms are only three and it will be five by 2020. While
,
the lunch area will be limited because half of that land has planned to be used as a shop in the future appeared.Remove the comma
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