The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph illustrates the amount of people that have travelled to a Caribbean
island
and divides them into two groups based on their choice of lodging, during the 7-year time period.
Overall
, there is an ongoing upward trend in the total number of visits each period, with the majority staying on the
island
in comparison to a cruise ship.
Firstly
, In 2010, travellers who were lodging in the Caribbean started from 0.25
million
and reached 1
million
, which was almost double compared to the previous period. The ship users started from 0.75
million
in the first year in 2010 but had no changes next year in 2011. Over the next three years, the figures for individuals staying on the ship and on the
island
doubled and reached around 0.5 to 1.5
million
visitors, respectively.
Secondly
, from the year 2013 to 2015 as the number of visitors staying on cruise ships increased dramatically to over a
million
visitors, the number of travellers stayed on the
island
equally with approximately 1.5
million
.
Finally
, in 2017, 3.5
million
people visited
this
specific Caribbean
island
and 2
million
of these chose to stay on cruise ships
while
others preferred the
island
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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