The charts show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the pie charts, there were four majors given in those years: Computer science, Medicine, Business, and Law.
The pie charts demonstrate the four different degrees which are
computer
science, business, law and medicine given to students
at National university
in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
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Overall
, the percentage
of students
who chose computer
increased over time whereas
, buisiness
had Correct your spelling
business
opposite
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the opposite
behavior
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behaviour
also
the other two majors fluctuated.
In 1990, the majoarity
of Correct your spelling
majority
students
graduated from buisiness
or Correct your spelling
business
computer
sicence
with Correct your spelling
science
the
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a
percentage
of 30. However
, a significant change happend
in the year 2000, 40 Correct your spelling
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per cent
students
got computer
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a computer
of
business graduates. A decade Correct determiner usage
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, the number of degrees given to Rephrase
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students
changed to 45 and 15 percent
respectively.
There were fewer students
who wanted to finish law
major in 1990, with Correct article usage
a law
the
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percentage
of 15, at the same year, medicine was 10 percent
more. Change the spelling
per cent
while
in 2000, the percentage
of degrees given to students
in medicine major had an upward trend, 30 percent
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percent
more than law, in 2010 the numbers turned back to as it was in 1990.Change the spelling
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