You are a famous singer and you have an idea for a new piece in your mind. Send a letter to the composer/producer and persuade them to help you make it.
I am Shaghayegh Shadman; we worked together on
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the "sunshine"
sunshine
" piece, which was a massive hit Capitalize word
Sunshine
at
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in
last
years
music scene. I'm writing Change noun form
year's
this
letter in order to ask you to compose a new song
for my novel recording which can capture a wider range of audience for both of us.
This
song
has been inspired from
a local couple's love whom I met Change preposition
by
last
month throughout my travel to the countryside; in my perspective, this
piece can be combination
of folk and modern music, the issue which can hold diverse music lovers' attention. Add an article
a combination
Accordingly
, such
song
can be lucrative and rewarding at the same timeCorrect article usage
a song
,
and can make a "wine-wine" occasion for us. In my point of view, our cooperation can lead Remove the comma
apply
this
recording to be nominated for various prizes.
I have written the lyric
of Fix the agreement mistake
lyrics
this
piece during the last
week; in my mind, you are the most appropriate one who can
give a life to Verb problem
apply
this
song
as our last
contribution was extremely successful around the world. Our collaboration in this
recording will make a big impact on people as you are a virtuoso composer who bears strong musical talent and can create incredible works.
I keenly looking forward to your response; should any questions arise, make sure you contact me.
best regards,
Shaghayegh ShadmanSubmitted by shaghayegh95shadman on
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coherence cohesion
To enhance coherence, ensure smoother transitions between ideas. For example, use connective phrases like 'In addition' and 'Moreover.'
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Check for minor grammar and typographical errors to improve clarity and professionalism.
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You provided a clear explanation of your idea and why it would be beneficial for both of you, which adds to the persuasive power of your letter.
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The letter maintains a formal and respectful tone throughout, which is appropriate for a professional request.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are polite and effective, framing the content of your letter well.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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