The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now
The maps show the changes that have taken place at a
bookstore
between 2000 and now.
Overall
, the construction of the two maps reveals that the bookstore
has transformed from a space primarily focused on several types of genre books
on shelves to one that now offers both a variety of books
and customer service areas.
In 2000, fiction books
were represented more than other genres such
as art, hobbies, and cookery, but over the past 24 years, the bookstore
has undergone a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable change is that the number of fiction books
has decreased, while
the shelves with books
on art, hobbies, and cooking have expanded slightly.
Further
development has been the addition of tables and chairs in the middle of the bookstore
for reading, providing a space for customers to sit and enjoy their books
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