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The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates
current
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 building and projections plan
in
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2020
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the 2020
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of
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an
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institution.
Overall
, the college has a significant transformation to
expansion
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the expansion
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 of size for
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 increasing number of enrollment and new
facillities
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facilities
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To begin
 with,
footpath
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the footpath
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 and garden both will be turned
into
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to
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a
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better use in terms of more parking space and extended area for
in
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house
facillities
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facilities
 inside the school. The bus station and main road,
both
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will remain the same in the future for the students and parents to commute and act as the main entrance to the establishment. Looking inside the construction, a new shop will be added adjacent to the lunch area and the toilet.
In addition
, the reception will be relocated to the
center
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 of the building.
Next,
the library will move to
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the opposite
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 side in order to create the same layout of
classroom
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the classroom
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 in the same direction, with the notable exception where one extra classroom will stay unchanged near the library.
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  • architecture
  • renovation
  • infrastructure
  • facade
  • landscaping
  • expansion
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • pedestrian
  • vehicular traffic
  • demolition
  • construction
  • recreational areas
  • commons
  • atrium
  • courtyard
  • upgrade
  • sustainability
  • commute
  • ingress
  • egress
  • blueprint
  • survey
  • layout
  • zoning
  • modernization
  • conservation
  • integration
  • footprint
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