The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The table illustrates the information regarding with size of subway systems in London,
Paris
and
Moscow
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the London Underground has the longest track,
while
the
Paris
Metro
and
Moscow
Metro
have the biggest number of stations and
the
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daily travellers respectively. The total
lenght
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length
of
track
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the track
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belonging to
London
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Underground is 408 km including underground and surface roads with
operation
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the operation
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of stations
are
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275 units. Even though,
this
city only has around 3 million passengers
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every single day. If we compare with
other
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two cities,
this
condition accounts for the lowest number of visitors.
On the other hand
, the
Paris
Metro
has built 300 subway stations,
whereas
the
Moscow
Metro
only established 182
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same facilities. Even though,
the
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Moscow
has the widest amount of visitors followed by the
Paris
Metro
with total passengers are 6.5 million and 4.5 million respectively.
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