The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The table illustrates the information regarding with size of subway systems in London,
Paris
and Moscow
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the London Underground has the longest track, while
the Paris
Metro
and Moscow
Metro
have the biggest number of stations and the
daily travellers respectively.
The total Correct article usage
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lenght
of Correct your spelling
length
track
belonging to Correct article usage
the track
London
Underground is 408 km including underground and surface roads with Correct article usage
the London
operation
of stations Add an article
the operation
are
275 units. Even though, Unnecessary verb
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this
city only has around 3 million passengers for
every single day. If we compare with Change preposition
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other
two cities, Correct article usage
the other
this
condition accounts for the lowest number of visitors.
On the other hand
, the Paris
Metro
has built 300 subway stations, whereas
the Moscow
Metro
only established 182 the
same facilities. Even though, Change preposition
of the
the
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Moscow
has the widest amount of visitors followed by the Paris
Metro
with total passengers are 6.5 million and 4.5 million respectively.Submitted by hikmanurdin04 on
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