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In the present day, remote work has become more popular according to technological advancement and global pandemics. Some suggest that this enhances employees productivity and ensures work-life balance, while others argue it could lead to loneliness and working over time

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In the present day, remote
work
 has become more popular
according
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 to technological advancement and global pandemics. Some suggest that
this
 enhances
employees
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employees'
employee's
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 productivity and ensures
work
-life balance,
while
 others argue it could lead to loneliness and working
over
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overtime
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time
. In the following paragraphs, both points of
views
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view
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 will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached. The key benefit of distance
work
 is
flexibility
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 it gives, workers can allocate
work
time
 freely and choose any desirable place for
working
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, thereby
it provides
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providing
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 more free
time
 for engaging
personal
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in personal
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 activities
such
 as playing with
childrens
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children
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, gardening or having dinner with family.
Additionally
,
this
 mode of
work
 reduces commuting expenses and car maintenance costs, causing improving employee
will-being
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well-being
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. In terms of social
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benefits
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benefit
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 it decreases air pollution and traffic congestion
,
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 and
also
 promotes the economy in digital industries
such
 as social
network
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networks
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,
food
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and food
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 delivery companies.
Moreover
 reducing the rate of contagious infection, especially easily spread viruses
such
 as
covid
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COVID-19
 and influenza.
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks to consider. Overworking and stressful
work
 situations can occur,
as a result
 of the lack of discipline. Separating
work
 life and personal life could be difficult. Working in the same isolated environment like
home
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 office every day and lack of social communication can result in loneliness or even mental health issues.
Moreover
, working online requires effective
time
 management and technological knowledge, which can be challenging for some people. In conclusion,
while
work
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working
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 from home offers various advantages,
for
instance
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 flexibility,
promoting
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productivity, more leisure
time
,
reducing
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reduced
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 revenues,
decreasing
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decreased
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financial
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finances
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, well-being improvement,
reducing
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 environmental issues and less contagious disease, it is important to consider the potential negative impacts on the general workers. If one has adaptability and discipline, remote working could be an excellent option,
however
face to
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face
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face-to-face
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 communication between colleges remains essential for ensuring good working relationships in the long term.
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grammar
Make sure to proofread your essay to correct minor grammar and vocabulary errors. For instance, 'childrens' should be 'children.'
examples
Devote more effort to providing specific examples to support your main points. This makes your argument stronger and more convincing.
style
Use varied sentence structures and vocabulary to keep your writing engaging and demonstrate your language proficiency.
balance
You have provided a balanced discussion of both the advantages and disadvantages of remote work.
structure
Your introduction and conclusion effectively outline and summarize the main points of the essay.
focus
The essay maintains a clear focus on the topic and addresses all aspects of the task.
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