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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram below shows us about
level
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the level
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 of
production
main
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the main
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 source of Fuel in
United
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the United
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 Kingdom
nearly
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for nearly
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 2 decades
that is
beetwen
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between
 1981
until
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and
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 2000.
In
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apply
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Overall
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Overall,
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 Petroleum is the most main fuel
to
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apply
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used
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use
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 in
UK
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the UK
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 and
have
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has
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growing
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a growing
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 rate used from 1981 until 2000. Coal is number two in the first
year
on
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in
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 1991 but
contantly
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constantly
decrease
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decreases
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year
 by
year
. Meanwhile Natural gas has
opposite
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the opposite
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 result because of its
used
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apply
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steady
grow
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growth
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. In 1981
production
 of
Petrolium
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Petroleum
achieve
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achieved
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 almost
on
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apply
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100
million
tonnes
 of
oil
 and
more
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apply
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higher until 140
miilion
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million
tonnes
 of
oil
 in 1986 ,
this
production
continue
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continued
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 stable until 2000 .
However
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However,
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 the
production
 has
anomali
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anomaly
 in 1991 which down to 100
million
tonnes
 of
oil
 that
year
. Coal
production
levek
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level
levels
start
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started
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 at 80
million
level
 in
the
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apply
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1981 and significantly
decrease
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decreased
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 below 40
million
tonnes
 of
oil
 in 2000.
In
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On
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other
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the other
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 hand , Natural gas
that has
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had
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 the lowest
production
level
 in 1981 , slightly
increase
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increased
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their
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its
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 energy unit
level
of
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by
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 manufacturing over 100
million
tonnes
 of
oil
 in 2000.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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