The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps

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how the town of Fosbury has changed between 1980 and 2015. Over the period, the town changed from having mainly green lands to making use of these free areas.

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Also

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have

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changed the

streets

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connections. In the

north east

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northeast

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side , the

teraced

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terraced

houses were removed and replaced with

car

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a car

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park in the

northren

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northern

area and a supermarket just below it . In the southeast

corner

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the

green feild

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greenfield

was

repalced

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replaced

with giant

warhouses

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warehouses

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, in the northwest

area

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the park which was facing the north houses changed from the right to the left and the traced houses

were build

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instead

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Finally

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, the westsouth corner which was occupied

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two tennis courts

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replaced with one sports center and park for cars. The connection between the main streets was through angled intersections in 1980 , which were changed to a

round about

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intesection

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intersection

in 2015.

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, two extra side roads were added, one leading to the warehouses in the southeast corner and another one leading to the sports

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centre

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the opposite site.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 5 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

178 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban development
rural layout
open spaces
housing areas
infrastructure
residential areas
road networks
commercial areas
economic growth
green spaces
urban expansion
public amenities
community development
demolished
renovated
modernization process
transportation infrastructure
landscape modification
environmental conservation
preservation

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The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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