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Band 5.5

Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. You should include -where you live -explain the problem -what he should do

#landlord #noise #block #flats #-where #-explain #-what
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Dear Sir, I hope
this
 letter finds you in
best
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the best
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 of spirits and radiant health. I am a tenant in one of your housing apartment
block
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 on South Bank
road
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Road
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 in flat number 216. I am writing
this
 letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding too much noise from my adjoining flat number 217. I have been living at
this
 property
from
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for
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last
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the last
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 6 years but I never faced
such
 issues in past.
However
,
from
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for
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 a few
weeks
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 my neighbour
plays
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has been playing
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loud music
in
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at
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the
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night around 11.00 PM. I tried to reach him but he was not willing to listen to me. It is a matter of great concern for me because
this
 issue is hampering my routine, as I am unable to fall asleep on time. I would urge you to do something about it. Either you ask that person to stop doing it or you ask him to vacate. If you want I can come in meet you
in-person
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 and explain the matter in detail. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.
Submitted by mrsdns on

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task achievement
The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task: where you live, the explanation of the problem, and what the landlord should do. Ensure to maintain a formal tone throughout the entire letter to improve clarity.
coherence cohesion
Consider rearranging your paragraph structure to enhance the logical flow. For example, explaining your lifestyle could precede the situation details, giving more context to your complaint.
greeting and closing
Your opening and closing are appropriate and polite, fitting for a formal complaint letter.
single idea per paragraph
You have included specific details (e.g., flat numbers, timing of the noise), which makes your complaint more credible.
complete response
The letter responds to every part of the task, explaining the problem clearly and suggesting a course of action for the landlord.
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