The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
The bar graph illustrates
that
the percentage of people in the United Kingdom eating fruit and vegetables at the recommended level in the Correct word choice
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year
2002, 2006 and 2010, divided into 3 categories.
Overall
, the highest consumption is contributed by UK
women in the year
2006. Conversely
, children in the UK
contributed to the lowest percentage in 2002.
To begin
with, the consumption of UK
females stood at 25% in the year
2002 and initially
peaked at 32% four years later, before reducing slightly to 27% in the last
period. Similarly
, men in the UK
consumed fruit and vegetables at 22% in the first year
. Following
this
, it experienced a minimal decline at 24% in 2010, after hitting a high of 28% in the previous four years.
Moving to the remaining categories, having consumed the least fruit and vegetables, children led in overall
consumption across the periods. It started at 11% in 2002,
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then
reached a peak of 16% in the year
2006. In the following four years, the figure exhibited a negligible drop at 14% in 2010.Submitted by may.pattareepan on
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