The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table provides how many quantities of local harvest and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia between 2004 and 2014.
As can be seen from the table, the figures of local catches surpassed the imports.
In addition
, the total number
present
Correct subject-verb agreement
presents
a
increasing trend in the Change the article
an
ten
Correct your spelling
ten-year
years
period.
Firstly
, the number
of local catches grew from 2677.7 metric tons
in 2004 to its peak at
8136.2 metric Change preposition
of
tons
in 2008. However
, it started to fall afterwards, from 7844.9 metric tons
in 2009 to 5031.9 metric tons
in 2014.
The figure for imported fresh fish had a more obvious fluctuation, The number
were
below 1000 metric Change the verb form
was
tons
for the first four years
. Nonetheless
, commencing
to climb Verb problem
it continued
from
2009 and reached its highest point at 1227.3 metric Change preposition
in
tons
in 2012.
The number
of total fresh fish harvest
grew steadily for six Wrong verb form
harvested
years
from 3142.2 metric tons
to 8949 metric tons
, and then
it fell for the following four years
. In brief, the numbers overall
increased in the ten years
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