The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table provides how many quantities of local harvest and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia between 2004 and 2014.
As can be seen from the table, the figures of local catches surpassed the imports.
In addition
, the total Linking Words
number
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present
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presents
a
increasing trend in the Change the article
an
ten
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ten-year
years
period.
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Firstly
, the Linking Words
number
of local catches grew from 2677.7 metric Use synonyms
tons
in 2004 to its peak Use synonyms
at
8136.2 metric Change preposition
of
tons
in 2008. Use synonyms
However
, it started to fall afterwards, from 7844.9 metric Linking Words
tons
in 2009 to 5031.9 metric Use synonyms
tons
in 2014.
The figure for imported fresh fish had a more obvious fluctuation, The Use synonyms
number
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were
below 1000 metric Change the verb form
was
tons
for the first four Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
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commencing
to climb Verb problem
it continued
from
2009 and reached its highest point at 1227.3 metric Change preposition
in
tons
in 2012.
The Use synonyms
number
of total fresh fish Use synonyms
harvest
grew steadily for six Wrong verb form
harvested
years
from 3142.2 metric Use synonyms
tons
to 8949 metric Use synonyms
tons
, and Use synonyms
then
it fell for the following four Linking Words
years
. In brief, the numbers Use synonyms
overall
increased in the ten Linking Words
years
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