Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Climate change is the main issue of modern society. We are all aware that it is caused by human actions 

as

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waste of energy, use of fossil combustibles or plastics and

also

deforestation. Among these activities, the

last

one continues to be a controversial topic and I will explain my viewpoint in

this

essay.

Firstly

, we have to consider the needs which lead men to cut down trees. The main reason regards the construction of new buildings, especially residential ones. In fact, many people believe that building a new home from the beginning is less expensive than buying one that still

existed

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.

Moreover

, they can choose how to organize spaces in order to build their dream house.

This

trend regards especially the developed areas of the world.

For example

, during my

youth

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there were many parks and green places in my hometown where my friends and I used to play. Nowadays, all these places have been replaced by new constructions. 

Secondly

, in many parts of the world, especially the less developed ones, humans destroy

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the forest

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forest

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forests

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in order to create

agricoltural

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agricultural

spaces.

Furthermore

, the wood gained can be sold to the big factories as a construction material. Personally, I believe that there are some possible solutions to overcome the problem of deforestation. Looking at the developed countries, governments should

encurage

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encourage

people to reconstruct old buildings. I feel that many people will choose

this

alternative as long as they

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save money.

Moreover

, it is very important the

promotion

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of

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apply

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new agricultural techniques which

enables

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enable

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farmers

using

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to use

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the same land many times. In conclusion, the choice of wood as a construction material

have

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to be

descouraged

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discouraged

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the imposition of higher taxes.