The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart shows the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart shows the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
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illustrate the result of renewing the Ashdown Museum on both visitor numbers and
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satisfaction. Specifically, The table presents the number of
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before and after being
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the pie chart demonstrates the result of a survey conducted to measure the
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. In general,the amount of the number of
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surged after the renewal ,
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, the satisfaction levels increased. The year before the refurbishment, only 74,000 visited the museum ;
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, over 90,000 individuals visited the refurbished
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museum
. Before the
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renewal
, about 40% of the guests were
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and 30% were extremely dissatisfied ;only a minority were satisfied and very satisfied ( 10 % and 15% respectively. In the
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of the
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satisfied and satisfied 35% and 40%
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respectively
. dissatisfied and very dissatisfied guests were a minority of only 20%.Notably, in both years about 5% of surveyers refused to
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