The Maps below show a beachfront area in Australia between 1950 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Maps below show a beachfront area in Australia between 1950 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate an area of beach in Australia in 1950 and now.
Overall
, it can be seen that the most noticeable thing is a change in the road in front of
beach
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.
Besides
that, there are several adding features followed by removing some facilities. Looking at the information in more detail, in 1950, the road ended in a car park located next to the pavilion.
By contrast
, nowadays
this
way is available longer until it reaches the
light house
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lighthouse
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.
In addition
, in the new layout, the developer
therefore
has built an additional parking area and rezised the old car park.
Whereas
, in the recent development, the
play ground
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playground
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has been erased.
On the other hand
, there is a restaurant behind the pool area. People
also
can enjoy themselves by entering surf clubs which can be accessed
in
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on
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the
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apply
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some sides of
beach
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the beach
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.
Finally
, the
dinning
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dining
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tables
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tables'
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light house
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lighthouse
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shown do not have
turned
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been turned
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during
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from
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1950 until now.
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