The Maps below show a beachfront area in Australia between 1950 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate an area of beach in Australia in 1950 and now.

Overall

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, it can be seen that the most noticeable thing is a change in the road in front of

beach

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the beach

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that, there are several adding features followed by removing some facilities. Looking at the information in more detail, in 1950, the road ended in a car park located next to the pavilion.

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, nowadays

this

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way is available longer until it reaches the

light house

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lighthouse

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, in the new layout, the developer

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has built an additional parking area and rezised the old car park.

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, in the recent development, the

play ground

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playground

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has been erased.

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, there is a restaurant behind the pool area. People

also

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can enjoy themselves by entering surf clubs which can be accessed

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the

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apply

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some sides of

beach

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the beach

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, the

dinning

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dining

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tables

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tables'

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light house

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lighthouse

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shown do not have

turned

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been turned

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during

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from

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1950 until now.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

158 words

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