The Maps below show a beachfront area in Australia between 1950 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate an area of beach in Australia in 1950 and now.
Overall
, it can be seen that the most noticeable thing is a change in the road in front of beach
. Add an article
the beach
Besides
that, there are several adding features followed by removing some facilities.
Looking at the information in more detail, in 1950, the road ended in a car park located next to the pavilion. By contrast
, nowadays this
way is available longer until it reaches the light house
. Correct your spelling
lighthouse
In addition
, in the new layout, the developer therefore
has built an additional parking area and rezised the old car park.
Whereas
, in the recent development, the play ground
has been erased. Correct your spelling
playground
On the other hand
, there is a restaurant behind the pool area. People also
can enjoy themselves by entering surf clubs which can be accessed in
Change preposition
on
the
some sides of Remove the article
apply
beach
. Add an article
the beach
Finally
, the dinning
Correct your spelling
dining
tables
Change noun form
tables'
table's
light house
shown do not have Correct your spelling
lighthouse
turned
Add a missing verb
been turned
during
1950 until now.Change preposition
from
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