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The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of cure company's sales between 2002 and 2006 in
Asia
,
Europe
 and
America
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
buyers
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number of buyers
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 in
Asia
 increased
steady
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steadily
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,
whereas
 in
Europe
 and
America
, it decreased with the
fluctuative
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fluctuating
 trends. Looking at the information in more detail, the
needs
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need
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of
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for
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drug
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drugs
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 always rose over the 5-year period shown. In 2002, total sales of firms was only a quarter,
then
 grew to 30 in the next year and changed to 40 in 2006. Compared with
other
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the other
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 two regions,
Asia
became
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had
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 the highest percentage of drug
demands
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demand
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 in 2006.
By contrast
, the initial sales in 2002 in
Europe
 and
America
 were 34 and 41 respectively. For
Europe
, there
were
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was
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additional
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an additional
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 proportion in
following
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the following
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 2 years before fell to 34 in 2005 and 30 in 2006. A similar condition has happened in
America
, where the largest demand
of
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for
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cure
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cures
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 in 2002 was here, exceeded
Asia
 and
Europe
.
Then
, it fell to only 30 in 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words asia, europe, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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