The line graph differ the amount of nitrogen oxide by four types of vehicles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
This
line graph shows the amount
of nitrogen oxide in four different types of vehicles. it is clear from the graph that there was some small rise and fall in each one of them.
According to
what is shown the Buses have a huge fall from 40 to nearly 25 and all of sudden, they rise up until they reach almost 42, while
the Lorries decreased from 33 to 25, and for the Petrol car the range was between the 10th and the 11th, Moreover
, Diesel car which considers having the less amount
of nitrogen oxide.
Nevertheless
, when it comes to speed we can say that petrol vehicles, also
have the best limit speed, and Diesel cars come second,
and for the third,
it is the Lorries, Lastly
, the buses have the least one.
To sum up
, we could that Buses have a large amount
of nitrogen oxide while
Diesel cars have a small amount
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