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The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
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The graph indicates the average of magazines sold per person compared by five
countries
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 between the years 2003 ,and 2005 and projected sales in 2007.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that in the first given time
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,
B
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 have the number of sold magazines than others when compared .
However
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, in the second given your
country
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 A has the second largest total. Alternatively, in the
last
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 given period
countries
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 D and E have quite lower median than Feather.
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 with, in the
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2023
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 it is clear to see that
countries
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 A and
B
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 have a figure of sold magazine more than another three
countries
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 around close to 50%. Meanwhile, the
countries
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 that make a nether numeral are
countries
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 E with under 10%. In the
year
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 2005,
countries
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 A and
B
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 have the biggest total in the first
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.
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, the interest amount is in
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C
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 even though it didn't optimum as A and
B
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 the statistic for
this
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country
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 is not lower than 30% as well and
this
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year
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 the quota for
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C
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 is about 35%.
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, the projected sales in 2007 as mentioned on top superlative integer still in
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 A and
B
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 with the figure 38-42%.
Nonetheless
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,
this
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year
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countries
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C
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 have a quantity of sold
magazine
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magazines
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 similar to
country
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C
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 around 35%. Though
countries
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 D have a rising number than two years before with 25%.
On the other hand
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,
country
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 E still has an under decimal of around 5%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, country, b, year, c with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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