The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line shows information about the types of food that young people in Australia enjoy eating. it is clear from the graph that the most common food is Humburgers.
According to
what is shown teenagers like to eat Hamburgers, pizza,
also
fish and chips, as we can see in the graph between 1975 to 2000 there was a huge increase in Humburgers, by almost 98%
while
pizza was the same by 97%, after that, we have the fish and chips which was increased between the new generations since 2000 and what it comes after by 60%.
Nevertheless
, If we come to the real reason which is
due to
different reasons starting with the components in the hamburgers that's what makes them very juicy and delicious. I would say that after the burgers, the pizza, and
lastly
the fish and chips.
To sum up
, we could say that young people will eat burgers more because it makes them feel happier than other kinds of food.
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