The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

THE LINE GRAPH, ILLUSTRATES THE TOTAL NUMBER OF THE DIFFERENT KINDS OF JUNK FOOD, THAT TEENAGERS CONSUMED IN AUSTRALIA, BETWEEN 1975 AND 2000 WITH FIVE YEARS INTERVAL

OVERALL

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, IT IS OBVIOUS THAT

THAT

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FISH AND SHIPS HAVE

SIGNIFICANT

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A SIGNIFICANT

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DOWNWARD TREND COMPARED TO

THE

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PIZZA AND HAMBURGERS HAVING THE SAME UPWARD MOVEMENT.

TO BEGIN

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WITH, FROM THE

YEAR

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1975, FISH AND CHIPS, WERE EATEN 100

TIMES

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AND SLIGHTLY WENT DOWN TO AROUND 80

TIMES

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IN 1980 AND WENT UP SLOWLY BELOW 100 IN 1980, BUT RAPIDLY DECREASED IN THE

YEAR

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1985 FROM 40

TIMES

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AT THE END

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OF THE

YEAR

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.

ON THE OTHER HAND

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, IN AUSTRALIAN TEENAGERS IN 1975 HAMBURGER AND PIZZA

HAS BEEN

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EATEN ABOVE 10

TIMES

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AND IN 1985

WHICH

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THEY BOTH ROSE TO MORE THAN 80TIMES AFTER 10 YEARS WITH BURGERS AND 25 YEARS WITH PIZZA,

ALTHOUGH

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THE LATTER

STAYS

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STAYED

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ON

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THE SAME LEVEL UNTIL THE

LAST

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YEAR

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BUT THE FORMER RISE UP TO 100

TIMES

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RESPECTIVELY.