The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
THE LINE GRAPH, ILLUSTRATES THE TOTAL NUMBER OF THE DIFFERENT KINDS OF JUNK FOOD, THAT TEENAGERS CONSUMED IN AUSTRALIA, BETWEEN 1975 AND 2000 WITH FIVE YEARS INTERVAL
OVERALL
, IT IS OBVIOUS THAT
THAT
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FISH AND SHIPS HAVE
SIGNIFICANT
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A SIGNIFICANT
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DOWNWARD TREND COMPARED TO
THE
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PIZZA AND HAMBURGERS HAVING THE SAME UPWARD MOVEMENT.
TO BEGIN
WITH, FROM THE
YEAR
1975, FISH AND CHIPS, WERE EATEN 100
TIMES
AND SLIGHTLY WENT DOWN TO AROUND 80
TIMES
IN 1980 AND WENT UP SLOWLY BELOW 100 IN 1980, BUT RAPIDLY DECREASED IN THE
YEAR
1985 FROM 40
TIMES
AT THE END
OF THE
YEAR
.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, IN AUSTRALIAN TEENAGERS IN 1975 HAMBURGER AND PIZZA
HAS BEEN
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EATEN ABOVE 10
TIMES
AND IN 1985
WHICH
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THEY BOTH ROSE TO MORE THAN 80TIMES AFTER 10 YEARS WITH BURGERS AND 25 YEARS WITH PIZZA,
ALTHOUGH
THE LATTER
STAYS
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ON
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THE SAME LEVEL UNTIL THE
LAST
YEAR
BUT THE FORMER RISE UP TO 100
TIMES
RESPECTIVELY.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, times with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • preference
  • frequency
  • trend
  • popularity
  • notably
  • anomaly
  • dominant
  • contrast
  • exhibit
  • proportion
  • category
  • significant
  • rate
  • margin
  • predominant
  • marginally
  • substantial
  • consistent
  • overall
  • variety
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