The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
THE LINE GRAPH, ILLUSTRATES THE TOTAL NUMBER OF THE DIFFERENT KINDS OF JUNK FOOD, THAT TEENAGERS CONSUMED IN AUSTRALIA, BETWEEN 1975 AND 2000 WITH FIVE YEARS INTERVAL
OVERALL
, IT IS OBVIOUS THAT THAT
FISH AND SHIPS HAVE Correct determiner usage
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SIGNIFICANT
DOWNWARD TREND COMPARED TO Correct article usage
A SIGNIFICANT
THE
PIZZA AND HAMBURGERS HAVING THE SAME UPWARD MOVEMENT.
Correct article usage
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TO BEGIN
WITH, FROM THE YEAR
1975, FISH AND CHIPS, WERE EATEN 100 TIMES
AND SLIGHTLY WENT DOWN TO AROUND 80 TIMES
IN 1980 AND WENT UP SLOWLY BELOW 100 IN 1980, BUT RAPIDLY DECREASED IN THE YEAR
1985 FROM 40 TIMES
AT THE END
OF THE YEAR
.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, IN AUSTRALIAN TEENAGERS IN 1975 HAMBURGER AND PIZZA HAS BEEN
EATEN ABOVE 10 Wrong verb form
WERE
TIMES
AND IN 1985 WHICH
THEY BOTH ROSE TO MORE THAN 80TIMES AFTER 10 YEARS WITH BURGERS AND 25 YEARS WITH PIZZA, Correct pronoun usage
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ALTHOUGH
THE LATTER STAYS
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STAYED
ON
THE SAME LEVEL UNTIL THE Change preposition
AT
LAST
YEAR
BUT THE FORMER RISE UP TO 100 TIMES
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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