Some people believe that education is a fundamental right and plays a crucial role in the development of individuals and societies. Discuss the importance of education and the factors that contribute to a successful education system.

A number of people agree that studying at universities is

basic

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step in the improvement of all

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people

also

the communities. In

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essay, how important education is and what makes an educational system successful will be discussed.

To begin

with, there are many reasons why someone should study.

First,

a person who graduates from university can find a suitable job easier

according to

their university certificate.

For example

, companies always look for experts in engineering or management.

In addition

, the elements that affect the success of an educational institution can be varied.

Firstly

, it is important for the education to be motivating.

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, students who are hardworking and get high marks should be encouraged by

prize

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,

such

as

scholarship

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or funds.

Furthermore

, the results of the students matter. If a bigger number of

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individuals who graduate from a

school

can enter

high rank

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universities, that

school

can be considered

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a successful one. High performance can be both encouraging for

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a new

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new comer

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,

also

for the

school

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reputation. In conclusion, education has always been essential for different reasons, and

also

the points that can make a studying

school

effective are very diverse. Students can choose the best option by considering all the options.