The given pie charts compare statistics for the yearly expenses of 5 different categories by a specific school in the United Kingdom between 1981 and 2001

The given pie charts compare statistics for the yearly expenses of 5 different categories by a specific school in the United Kingdom between 1981 and 2001
The
two
pie charts
shown
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compare the expenses per year for five potentially various groups, namely, insurance, teachers'
salaries
,
furniture
and
equipment
, resources, and other workers'
salaries
, allocated to a particular school in the United Kingdom in 1981 and 1991. If we take the five attributes in combination,
it is clear that
the highest consumption rates occur on teachers'
salaries
, followed closely by other workers'
salaries
while
resources,
furniture
and
equipment
,
as well as
insurance in which the lower percentages are revealed. The lowest percentages are for insurance where the figures for the
two
categories hardly vary, with both 1981 at 2% and 1991 at 3% of their respective totals and
furniture
and
equipment
at 2 percentage points more in 1991. The other workers'
salaries
data
also
show broad similarities though the percentages for the
two
are higher than resources, with both 1981 and 1991 at 35% of the totals and consisting of a
furniture
and
equipment
share of 15% for 1981.
Similarly
, teachers'
salaries
show similar distribution patterns since there is never more than a ten percentage point difference between the
two
over the years
are
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage of total expenses
  • allocation of funds
  • expenditure
  • evolved over time
  • yearly expenses
  • educational resources
  • significant shifts
  • categories of expenses
  • proportional changes
  • span of years
  • budget distribution
  • operational costs
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