The given pie charts compare statistics for the yearly expenses of 5 different categories by a specific school in the United Kingdom between 1981 and 2001

The given pie charts compare statistics for the yearly expenses of 5 different categories by a specific school in the United Kingdom between 1981 and 2001
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The
two
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pie charts
shown
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compare the expenses per year for five potentially various groups, namely, insurance, teachers'
salaries
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,
furniture
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and
equipment
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, resources, and other workers'
salaries
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, allocated to a particular school in the United Kingdom in 1981 and 1991. If we take the five attributes in combination,
it is clear that
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the highest consumption rates occur on teachers'
salaries
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, followed closely by other workers'
salaries
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while
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resources,
furniture
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and
equipment
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,
as well as
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insurance in which the lower percentages are revealed. The lowest percentages are for insurance where the figures for the
two
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categories hardly vary, with both 1981 at 2% and 1991 at 3% of their respective totals and
furniture
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and
equipment
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at 2 percentage points more in 1991. The other workers'
salaries
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data
also
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show broad similarities though the percentages for the
two
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are higher than resources, with both 1981 and 1991 at 35% of the totals and consisting of a
furniture
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and
equipment
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share of 15% for 1981.
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, teachers'
salaries
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show similar distribution patterns since there is never more than a ten percentage point difference between the
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over the years
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studied.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, salaries, furniture, equipment with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage of total expenses
  • allocation of funds
  • expenditure
  • evolved over time
  • yearly expenses
  • educational resources
  • significant shifts
  • categories of expenses
  • proportional changes
  • span of years
  • budget distribution
  • operational costs
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