The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The listed diagram depicts the proportion of assession of uneducated people by categories, namely, region and gender for the previous year. If we take six countries in combination,

it is clear that

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the highest level of uneducated people occurs in South

Asia

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, followed closely by Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa

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East

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/Oceania, Latin America/Caribbean

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other developed countries in which the lower percentages are revealed. The lowest percentages were found

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in developed countries where the figures for the two genders hardly vary, with both approximately 2% for women and 1% for men and Latin America/Caribbean at 10 percentage points more for males in conjunction with about 12

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more for the

last

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year. The East

Asia

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/Oceania data

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shows broad differences though the percentages for Sub-Saharan Africa are higher than the three previous regions, with both men's community at slightly more than 30% and women's community at almost the ceiling of 50%.

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, Arab States and South

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show similar colossal patterns since there is never more than a two percentage point difference for

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community and roughly five for

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fellowship for the

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year studied.

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art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. to what extent do you agree or disagree ?