The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Both maps illustrate the alteration of Nelson's
city
from 2000 until now. For 24 years, the area of Nelson has changed almost things
although
some places are still stable in time. In general, the hall of residence and new market have been built and the disappearance of the road at the same time. One of the interesting changes is the road next to the
city
centre
where
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which
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has been replaced by pedestrians
in
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today.
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Moreover
, a lot of stores have developed across the line including restaurants, bars, clubs
as well as
the new covered market. The old shop around the road and
city
centre
becomes the new shop. After that time, the train station was relocated between the
city
and the university.
However
, the university still stayed the same in recent times. Nowadays, the plants are replaced by the new shopping
centre
.
Furthermore
, the
city
centre
has some bicycles in order to serve people's demands.
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