The table shows data about what people in the UK thought the government should increase spending on. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given tables indicate comprehensive information regarding the attitudes of residents in different age groups about the budget that should be dedicated to three basic needs of society namely
health
, education
, and other areas in England.
From an overall
perspective, it is starkly apparent that the more the dwellers get aged, the more they prioritize their health
. Besides
, men were more interested in education
, while
female cared about health
more.
Upon more rigorous scrutiny, it can be revealed that almost half of the females preferred the budget to be devoted to the health
system. whereas
, nearly one-third of the men accounted for that. Education
was of great importance for men with 55% which was 15% more than females. The other areas were not in the same priority as the other two mentioned issues.
As regards the second table, it can be seen that for the first age group education
was more important, while
for the other three age groups health
was more significant with older having more attention with
72%. With the exception of the 55-65 and older, whose other aspects are in second place after Change preposition
at
health
, this
figure gained the least attention.Submitted by samirakasraee72 on
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