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The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and pie charts provide key information about the count of
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 published by local and international
students
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 from universities, in Australia, in 2001 and 2010.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the total number of
research
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, in 2010 was higher compared to 2001.
In addition
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, the number of
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 announced by international
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, males or females, saw an increase, in 2010,
whereas
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 there was a notable decrease in
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 by both Australian genders in the same year.
According to
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 what is shown, in 2001, the total number of
research
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 was 38849, the majority of them was for local
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, at 33657,
while
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 the rest was for international
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, at 5129.
However
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, the international
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 introduced more
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, in 2010, at 14593, they remained lower than local
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 by a big difference, at 24895. In terms of percentage, in 2001, international
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 accounted for 13% of the total, which was divided into 9% for males and 4% for females. Despite the ratio of international
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 rising to 27%, in 2010, the proportion of local
research
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 declined by 14% compared to 2001.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words research, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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