The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates changes in the total number of junk food consumed by young people in Australia over the 25-year period, from 1975 to 2000.
Overall
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, the
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of hamburgers and pizzas increased considerably.
By contrast
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, fish and chips dropped dramatically shown. In the initial year which was 1975, the popularity of hamburgers and pizzas was significantly lower compared with fish and chips. The amount of times eaten for those was roughly 10 times for a whole year respectively.
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, they rose widely in the next years. By 2000, hamburgers and pizzas were consumed by around 100 and slightly over 85 times.
On the other hand
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, fish and chips became the lowest percentage in terms of total consumption.
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, in 1975, just under a
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hundredfold
enjoyed eating
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meal. In the following 5 years, it happened a small fall before arose again in 1985.
After
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this
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period, the sales of that fast food continued to drop to only about 45 in 2000.
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  • trend
  • popularity
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  • anomaly
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  • contrast
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  • significant
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  • substantial
  • consistent
  • overall
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