The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram above provides details of how to produce

sugar

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from

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cane

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in seven stages

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, the whole manufacturing process of

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from

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cane

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involves seven steps. The mature

sugar

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cane

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passes through two steps to transform into juices. The

sugar

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cane

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juices

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undergo a series of procedures to obtain the type of

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used for confectionery.

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, it takes approximately one and a half years to grow

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canes into a stage where they are suitable for the making of

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.

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, the farms

harvests

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the mature

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canes

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either manually or using a harvester.

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, the

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canes

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cane

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are crushed thoroughly and

transform

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into juice. The

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cane

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juice is

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purified to remove any impurities that might contaminate the product. In the purifying step, a funnel-like equipment called

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filter is used. The filtered liquid is

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evaporated in

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evaporator at a fairly high temperature with constant heat provided at the bottom. The purpose of

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step is to make the

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cane

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juice into a form of

syrup

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. Throughout

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stage, crystals are inevitably formed within the

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.

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, the

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needs to

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in order to remove those solids.

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, the

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is dried and cooled in a container resulting in the final product which is

sugar

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.